Week 3: Expression over Perfection

 

At this point in the challenge, you've likely become more comfortable with the notes and structure of your piece. Now it's time to shift focus toward interpretation and emotional depth. This week is about exploring what the music means to you and how you can communicate that meaning through sound.

Assignment:

  1. Define the Emotional Landscape
    Take a moment to reflect: what is the emotional world of your piece? Is it reflective, playful, tragic, or unsettled? Write a short reflection (1–2 sentences) describing the feeling you want to convey and how that shapes your approach.

  2. Record a Passage with Intention
    Select 8–16 measures that feel emotionally significant. Focus on tone, voicing, and timing—not technical perfection. Record and share your performance, along with a brief note on what you aimed to express and why you chose that section.

  3. Engage with the Community
    Watch another participant’s video and leave a thoughtful comment. Offer one observation about what worked well!

Guidance:

Schubert's music often blurs the line between clarity and ambiguity, joy and sorrow. Rather than striving for a “correct” interpretation, embrace the nuance and let the music unfold naturally. Sometimes the most moving performances are the ones that feel the most personal.

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    • Michelle R
    • Michelle_Russell
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    This Landler is definitely playful and light, but also has a sense of elegance to it. I'm hoping to convey both playfulness and elegance which comes out in how I'm approaching the articulation. The first time through I played more legato in the right hand to express a gentle elegance, and then in the repeat I switched to a softer dynamic and a more playful staccato to bring out the playfulness. I've recorded the A section, primarily because I'm able to play it better than the B section! I'm still challenged by bringing out the 3rd beat accents in the B section, and the octave reaches in the left hand in the B section are occasionally uncomfortable to my healing 5th finger (so I'm not practicing those sections as much). 

    I appreciate how encouraging this community is. As a beginner, it can occasionally be intimidating to post my seemingly small progress amongst all of the more advanced repertoire that is being played so well here. Thanks to Dominic and all of you for together creating such a warm, inviting, and uplifting place to share music.

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    • Michelle R I hadn't heard this particular LĂ€ndler before, but I love it. Your efforts at bringing out the staccati definitely are paying off!! Not fully committing to crisp, short staccato is a mistake I often make - out of laziness, I guess - and your articulation is so perfect here! Really charming.

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      • Michelle R
      • Michelle_Russell
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      Alexander Weymann Thanks, Alex. It's been fun to learn this little piece. 

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    • Michelle R Great job with this.  Nice stocatto and I can clearly hear the melody!

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    • Michelle R Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the Landler! It's wonderful to hear how you're blending playfulness and elegance in your interpretation. Playing legato for the gentle nuances and incorporating soft staccato for playfulness sounds like a beautiful approach. Don't be too hard on yourself about the B section; it's great that you’re focusing on what feels comfortable while your finger heals. Sometimes, taking time to rest certain passages can lead to a fresh perspective. Your openness and commitment to learning inspire many of us! Remember, every bit of progress is significant, and your contributions to this community are valued. Keep it up!

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      • Michelle R
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      Jennifer Mehta Thanks, Jennifer. 

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  • The prevailing mood and character of this impromptu is lyrical; the melody is folk song-like, and even the eighth note triplets of the more urging and flowing middle section could be imagined as played by a guitar or mandolin. However, Schubert's typical suprising modulations, deceptive cadences, and shadings of color create an undercurrent of unspoken sorrow, pain and tragedy that give the piece depth and darkness. 

    I chose a segment from the "A" section, bar 17-30. It expresses a brief surge of resolve and optimism that nevertheless cannot be sustained and immediately fades into doubt and ambiguity, then resigns itself to a gentle, wistfully smiling “sigh” (two E flats) in the tonic, repeated as a question mark in the dominant 7th. I find that moment incredibly touching. To me, this segment is maybe the most challenging one of the entire piece. Because of the big chords in forte and fortissimo, and even ffz in both hands, it is easy to simply play it louder than the rest and in an almost vulgar manner. The result would be a break of the piece’s character, of the musical line and the narrative arc. Sometimes, when my teacher Karl-Heinz KĂ€mmerling would ask me to play a passage forte or fortissimo and I responded by simply hitting the keys harder and playing louder, creating a harsh or flat sound in the process, he would say "Aber nicht Ă€ußerlich!" which translates as "But not externally!" or "But not superficially!". A forte or fortissimo, in his teaching, would always have to organically flow out of the music, grow from what came before it, and be motivated internally. That is precisely the challenge in this short part of the Schubert Impromptu. The forte or fortissimo still has to sing and breathe. In addition, one has to carefully calibrate the gradations between forte, forte with an accent, fortissimo, fortissimo with an accent, fortissimo sforzando, and piano. Then one has to shape the phrasing between stronger and lighter notes while always maintaining the basic dynamic within that phrase: the lighter/weaker note of a phrase that is marked forte or fortissimo as its baseline dynamic cannot suddenly sound mezzopiano or piano. And even the bars that are marked "piano" have to carry the sound; my first voice teacher would always say when I sang a phrase piano that didn't resonate or project: "yes, but it can't sound like something bad has happened to you". That's true for piano and pianissimo playing on our instrument as well. 

    https://vimeo.com/1100919504/0233219f1e?ts=0&share=copy

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      • Michelle R
      • Michelle_Russell
      • 20 hrs ago
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      Alexander Weymann Well played, Alex. I love your descriptive post, too, and how artfully you put words to what is expressed in the music. 

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    • Alexander Weymann beautiful!  I agree, your description is wonderful.  A good explanation of playing forte or fortissimo.  Thank you.  I look forward to hearing the whole piece!  What you played here made me eager for more.  

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    • Alexander Weymann Amazing work and such powerful description! Thank you!!

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    • Hazel
    • Hazel
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    I haven’t posted anything yet so here is the first part of my Schubert op90 no3.  I’ve been trying to concentrate on bringing out the shape and phrasing of the melody and making the bass sound supportive. It’s definitely improved after using Dominic’s practice tips. I think I need more contrast between the calm and more stormy passages and work on the transitions between these sections. 

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      • Dora Burak
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      Hazel that is really quite beautiful and I agree with you about a bit more contrast.

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    • Hazel Welcome! It's fantastic to see you sharing your progress with Schubert's op90 no3. It sounds like you're really focusing on bringing out the expressive qualities in the melody and creating that supportive bass, which is so important in conveying the character of this piece. Your intention to explore contrasts between calm and stormy passages will add so much depth to your performance! Have you considered experimenting with dynamic markings? Sometimes, even small changes in dynamics can make a huge difference in transitions. Often we need more dynamic contrast to reflect the character better.

      Keep up the great work, and I can't wait to hear more about your progress!

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  • Hi everyone, just posting a very short excerpt this week. I think these 8/9 bars represent a turning point in the piece with the turmoil in the preceding section giving way to a more generally more calm and accepting mood for the remainder of the piece. I'm still working on the voicing for this section as some of the chords are a little awkward to play. Derek

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      • Michelle R
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      Derek McConville Nice work, Derek! I enjoyed the ebb and flow in your playing. Looking forward to hearing you play the entire piece.

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    • Derek McConville Very nice.  It flows nicely!  I look forward to hearing the whole piece.  Thank you

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    • Derek McConville Hi Derek! Your insight into these 8/9 bars is so refreshing!  For voicing those awkward chords, have you considered breaking them down by focusing primarily on the melody first? Sometimes, it helps to play the melody alone with the left hand just doing simple root notes or even accompany lightly to emphasize the voice. It could bring out the calmness you’re seeking! Looking forward to hearing how it progresses!

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    • Dora Burak
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    First, I’d like to echo Michelle’s thanks for the inclusive spirit of Domenic and the tonebase community.  I too have only been playing for a few years and agree it can be very intimidating to participate after hearing the advanced performances of others.

    I’ve been working on the Kupelwieser Waltz, primarily the A section.  It may be too advanced for me, but I do love it.  I’ve had a few notable challenges.  First, I had just upgraded my piano from a Yamaha digital Clavinova to a Kawai K200 and second, having never played in G flat, I found staying on the black keys difficult, making  fluid playing even more challenging for me.  I did practice exaggerating the melody, but need to do more of that.

    Regarding the emotional intent, the tone of the A section is very lyrical and flowing. The listener is meant to imagine two lovers waltzing around the room, with such grace they appear to be floating, completely and delightfully absorbed in each other.   Needless to say, I do not achieve that intent ;) 

    https://youtube.com/shorts/jislMQaMQaA?feature=share
     

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    • Dora Burak You’ve made a good start with this, especially upgrading the piano, with a totally different touch.  Keep with it!  It will be worth it and will make your playing so much more enjoyable.  I could hear the melody in this.  Keep going, you’re doing great!

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      • Dora Burak
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      Jennifer Mehta thank you so much for the encouragement!

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    • Dora Burak Hi there and welcome! We are all in this together, so I really appreciate you sharing with us!

      I completely resonate with your experience; the Kupelwieser Waltz is such a beautiful yet challenging piece, and it’s great to see you diving into it! Transitioning to a new piano can indeed feel daunting, but it sounds like you’re embracing the change wonderfully. Practicing the melody and exaggerating the phrasing is a fantastic way to develop your interpretation—don’t hesitate to keep exploring that! Remember, every musician struggles with similar hurdles, especially when it comes to voicing and fluidity, so you're not alone in this journey. The imagery you paint of the two lovers waltzing is so poetic; Keep up the great work!

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      • Dora Burak
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      Dominic Cheli Thank you!

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  • Schubert’s Moment. Musicaux, Op 94 No 4 is filled with tension seen in the contrast of staccato in the left hand and legato in the right.  This tension carries even during the times when both hands are legato.  The center section is more mellow, but there is still an underlying tension seen in the accents on the “and” of the first beat, and the multiple accidentals.  

     

    But there are surprising areas of peace and beauty in the midst of the tension.  The portion I have recorded here is in the middle section, 12measures beginning at the repeat.  It is filled with accidentals, and subtle accents, and subtle staccato various places.  Then, at measure 12, it resolves to this beautiful D flat major chord.  The beauty at this particular moment really resonates with me.  

     

    https://youtu.be/7PF15cmL9to

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    • Jennifer Mehta 

      What an insightful reflection on Schubert’s Moment! I completely agree about the tension being so palpable throughout the piece, even in the more mellow sections. The way you've described the contrasting elements really highlights the emotional depth Schubert achieves. I also appreciate how you've pointed out those moments of beauty amidst the tension, particularly the resolution to that D flat major chord — it really does evoke a sense of peace. Thank you!

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