Week 2: Share your progress - get feedback!

Week 2 Assignment: Make a short video. First, discuss what voicing and tone you are aiming for in the passage. Second, state the practice technique/techniques you used to achieve your goal. Then, perform for us to receive feedback on your progress.

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iTPM8TylNBc

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    • TWI
    • 3 days ago
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    Hi friends- The first two points in the assignment are very important. Instead of just posting a video for help, I do want you to attempt to label 1. what your goal was in practice 2. what you did to try to work towards that goal. 

    These two steps are difficult and I find many times students either don't have a specific enough goal or choose the wrong approach to fix a goal.... so let me help check that process for you, as well as your playing :) 

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    • Juan_Carlos
    • 2 days ago
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    Hi Dr. Osterkamp and everyone!

    I'm going to work on the first bars (1-18) of Schubert's Sonata in B-flat major D960. My goal is to focus on voicing, the main top melody in the right hand and, on a secondary level, the tenor voice in the left hand, while aiming for a soft, warm sound. To achieve that, I'll follow your remarks on ghosting, adding different voices, and pressing the keys as relaxedly as possible.

    • Kimy
    • 2 days ago
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    Hi Dr. Leann and everyone,

    On Debussy's Claire De Lune (m. 15-26),

    1. My goal is to try to memorise most of the chords and bringing out the melody with expression that I can hear on both hands. No pedaling yet. Example as below..

    2. For practice, I still practice LH first, then RH, and listening to the melody (in octaves), lighten the touch on the notes (in the middle of the chords, that are accompanying the melody). Then both hands togethers, as relaxed as I can.

    Thank you for guidance.

      • TWI
      • Yesterday
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       I would try to add in pedaling from the beginning, as it will change the balance and perception of whatever voicing your are working towards. It is harder to do everything at once but saves the most practice time and having to "redo" things later. I would not recommend practicing hands separate, as, again, it is less efficient. Being able to play the RH alone well is great but it doesn't necessarily mean that when you go to put it with the LH it will be any easier.... it is a different thing! Try to look for ways to unify the hands from the beginning, rather than try to train them as separate entities. 

       

      How do you work on lightening the touch on the middle notes? That would be a great chance to use specific practice techniques in your goals. How do you work on relaxing the hands? Use specific practice techniques in planning your practice :) 

      • Kimy
      • 7 hrs ago
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       Thank you so much for your advice.

      Here's my practice 

      https://youtube.com/shorts/EbeLU7D2kE8?si=1vRFAuio0obXXjop

      It's like never have enough time to get to my goal yet. :)

      1. I don't have specific technique on relaxing the hands. But I try to use the octopus hand method and LH (clockwise)/RH (anti clockwise) circular motion (if I remember). Also I try to remind myself to relax the fingers, wrist and shoulders. When it comes to the section from m. 20 with the anime, sometimes I noticed I can tense up, even to the shoulders.

      2. The middle notes touch - I try to put (drop) my weight on the melody (usually the 1st and 5th fingers), kind of lightly touching on middle notes. But sometimes as it goes faster from the anime section, I don't really noticed my fingers on the middle notes. It's just like octopus hands dropping and lifting.

      3. Still haven't memorized everything - half way through :)

      4. the pedaling - I use the simplest way - press down at the start of the bar and release at the end, but at some passages, I do the up/down more at the last 2-3 beats. No techniques yet.

      Thank you in advance for your feedback and guidance.

      It's been an interesting learning experience to revisit a passage I used to struggle.

      • TWI
      • 4 hrs ago
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       Yes, these TWI give almost no time for goals to be reached but the hope is more that there is progress towards a goal and an accurate goal :) 

      Your movements are SO much better! You are on the right path! Great work-

      My biggest comment is that the rhythm is not always accurate. Sometimes you are rushing, sometimes playing the incorrect rhythm. I would start by testing yourself if you can play everything perfectly in time. Your musical choices are mostly very nice but they are distorting the written rhythm too far. Make more subtle planned choices after making sure that you have read everything accurately and can play perfectly in time. 

    • Roy_JamesPike
    • Yesterday
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    Hello Dr Leann, firstly, I love the clarity of your teaching on Tonebase. Thank you so much for this. My plan for Week 2 is to have much more clarity about rolling chords and to achieve more beauty in the distribution of the notes and the resulting harmony.

     I am a trained flute player so I’m much more comfortable when we’re playing ‘in the gods’, which is great for the leger lines at the top of the keyboard, but the opposite end is less than good. I am okay to C below the bass clef then I have to count down in thirds, which is fine but the problems come when it’s not a straightforward  diatonic chord. I manage this by memorising the chord then not really reading the notes. This can have its own challenges as I find myself on occasions inserting a chordal note, which sounds correct harmonically even though the written note may be another note in the same chord. The most confusing leger lines for me are when the ones above the bass clef have ones below the treble clef at the same time. My brain hurts when trying to work out the fingering. 

    I do read in blocks so I know, for instance, that if it is a G7 chord then the F and the G may be next to each other in the chord, and if there’s a note around three lines below the bass clef then it’s likely to be the tonic of that chord. I do play my scales. I have a table that includes three of everything each week, so that I rotate all the scales, arpeggios, dominant 7ths, etc., each month. However, I don’t read them when playing. I look at the keyboard, apart from checking the correct fingering in the score if necessary. I use the ‘Grand Form’ so I have to play without looking at the keyboard for the extremes of the range, particularly in contrary motion, so feeling from one note the next is part of that process. I don’t find that this transfers to arpeggios very well (yet).

    I don’t do the pecking head business because my peripheral vision allows me to see the page and glance down to make sure I am in the right vicinity on the piano for the required chords. I often see the pattern in the score and then look at the keyboard while playing through several chords. Not glancing up and down is fine if the chords are under the hands but the problems arise when there are leaps, say the start of the C minor Chopin Nocture Op 48, which is numbered 13, not 1, in the edition I have.

    The ‘rolling’ appears many times in this nocturne and I have to add in more as my stretch is now just a 9th, at most. I don’t think it was ever a major 10th, but I recall some minor 10ths used to be manageable. Of course, with Chopin, it’s not only the outer notes that need a maximum stretch, but there are challenging stretches required for the intermediate notes too.

    You mention in Week 2 rolling out from the thumbs, which I have never done. My preference is to roll from bottom to top, starting the RH when the LH has completed its notes, but I am never sure whether I should be starting to roll each hand at the same time. Similarly, if the LH is rolled and the RH is not, as it’s straightforwardly a chord, then I play the RH chord when I reach the last note of the LH rolled chord. Also, I prefer to use arpeggio fingering for the ‘roll’, while being conscious that I ought to be developing the use a wider span across all the notes in the chord without crossing over the thumb.

    I have been practising all of this C minor Nocturne. It’s always such a pleasure to discover that I can get something off the page that I would have doubted previously. I was practising another Chopin piece before this TWI began. It’s the D flat major Prelude, Opus 28, No: 15. Chopin’s bel canto lines are the best way of internalising ‘voicing’. I’m loving applying your voicing technique from Bar 36 onwards.

    My flute playing comes in handy when voicing. We play with our fingers hovering over the keys, if you have  a good technique (each key has its own finger albeit we use additional  keys in tricky fingerings). This means that we develop the hovering technique that you demonstrated while depressing the voiced key, albeit the intention is to play the chordal keys ‘sotto voce’. I am now applying this to the piano.

    My teaching method for flute beginners was not to use music for several weeks. It’s hard enough for a 10-year old just to hold the flute in balance and play one note, let alone try to decipher a score at the same time. I used to teach three notes over the course of a couple of weeks. This was after they had no trouble getting the flute to speak with a good embouchure on the head joint alone, which could take several weeks in itself.

    I would ask their parents to bring them three times each week for a twenty minute lesson because leaving them alone for a week is too long when they’re young. I would take an A4 sheet around Week 4 of putting the flute together and draw a single line across the landscape page and say this line is ‘G’. They would then play G looking at the page. I would then add the G clef at the end of the lesson and say this is why we call it the ‘G clef’. Other lines would be added in the coming weeks and the relationship of the notes was built up organically/harmonically. 

    I write this because, even though the flute is a single-line instrument, the same problem that we have at the piano occurs on the transverse flute. The notes in the score are vertical, whereas the instrument is horizontal. I often wonder whether writing out the names of the chordal notes in a straight line would aid comprehension of the vertical structuring of a score. I am going to try this after writing on the score the harmonic progression on the score, and then writing out several chords in sequence to see if this aids memorisation of the given chords.

      • TWI
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      1. I would be careful in reading as you described in the third paragraph of "if it's three ledger lines below the bass clef it is likely to be the tonic." This is not a valid reading method, so it might cause some misreadings as you explore different eras of piano music. It takes time but the best method is ultimately developing fluency in another clef through patience and memorization. Memorizing the clef how you explained memorizing the G clef is the best method :) 

      2. I know there is a school of piano playing that prioritizes not looking at the keys. I, personally, do not think it has a lot of merit. The concept of feeling distance between notes is crucial to piano BUT it doesn't get trained by forcing lack of vision. Distance motor memory gets trained by repetition. If anything you want to include your eyes in this process. If you train something like a leap without looking, when you add your eyes back in, it will feel like a completely new thing. Eyes help with balance and perspective :) Use all the tools!

      3. We don't want to develop a "wider span" for the chords. The process of rolling is trying to do the opposite... we want to imagine chords as just a series of notes that our hand is quickly sliding over at an incredibly small, fast, efficient speedy motion. We never want to be preplaced on a chord or try to reach for anything. The idea is to be letting go and preparing all the time. I'm not sure what you mean about arpeggios fingering for the 'roll.' The roll here is training us to work on letting go of notes in the piece with the final fingering so switching the fingering would not be useful at that stage. 

      4. I'm glad the voicing technique is going well! 

       

      Thank you for sharing your flute insights! 

      • Roy_JamesPike
      • 16 hrs ago
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       Thank you for the feedback. I agree totally with your comment on reading the extremities of the bass notes. My thoughts were already moving towards playing lots of pieces with passages that have both hands in the bass clef. 

    • Victoria_Macdonald
    • Yesterday
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    I have to say that in watching your video, I thought I completely understood the technique of dropping your hands and thumbs onto the chords. This was my goal for the second video. But, sadly, it doesn't seem as easy as it looks, or I'm just not used to it yet. I came away with a feeling as though I was petting or stroking the keyboard. Not sure if it's an improvement over the first video, but I welcome your feedback on how to improve. Maybe I just need more practice.

      • TWI
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       Hi! Wow, your release is getting SO much better. Yes, you will feel like you are petting/stroking the keyboard, correct!

      1. You want to make sure that you aren't "preparing" the next chord position. The release of your chords is so much better... now make sure that you are making one fluid motion from the release into a splat on the next chord, NOT moving to the next chord, freezing into a position, and then playing. 

      2. It is NOT an easy technique... it is quite advanced so you will need time to absorb it :) 

      3. Make sure that your entire hand it relaxed when you attack a chord. Sometimes the fingers in the middle are lifting. This will naturally improve when you stop preparing the chord shapes. 

    • Jessica_Pizano
    • Yesterday
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    I am still working on the second movement of Ravel's Sonatine and it has quite a few chordal passages that I am working on. I likely will try to record measures 33-44 to post. In terms of the voicing, the melody is in the upper voice of the right hand and so that needs to be brought out. Tone wise, the right hand is quite high up and so I am looking for a bright bell-like tone. While lower, the left hand is still relatively high for most of the chords. However, in measure 33 there is a low D-flat and A-flat and then you get a B-flat double octave in measure 35, and a low E pedal from measures 39-40 that I think are texturally important to emphasize sufficiently to ground this section. 

    Regarding practice, I am trying to use a combination of the squid technique and the pulling of the hand towards the lap. These are both new concepts to me. It is not something my teacher has worked with me on. I am still working this out as it is so different than my usual technique. I have found that everything started out to loud and jarring, but I am starting to be able to control it better. It is, however, easier to get a faster and more legato feel to the chords. Thankfully, this section has a lot of the same chord in various inversions from bars 33-38 so it is a bit easier in the sense of not needing to memorize a number of chords. There is a bit more movement for the remainder of the bars, but it is an allusion back to the first movement and something I am more familiar with.

    Hopefully, I will be ready to post a video soon.

      • TWI
      • Yesterday
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       Yes, it is normal for things to become a bit louder initially because you are learning to use your arm weight, which is quite "weighty." My TWI on dynamic control talks about how to slowly learn to control that new-found power. It is better to let things be a little loud for a while so that you internalize the new technique since it is healthy and will give you better control and facility in the long run :) Great work!

      • Jessica_Pizano
      • 13 hrs ago
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       Thank you for the additional guidance. I have continued to work on this section and have made a recording for you. I'd love to say that it was performance ready, but really I am just starting to be able to incorporate some of the new technique you have shared. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thank you for your help!

      • TWI
      • 12 hrs ago
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       I def can see that the drop is improving with the tone production. 

      1. you are still trying to find and hover over the chord position before pressing it down. keep working towards not locking your hand into position prior and, instead, doing the squid splat.

      2. You are still freezing after playing the chords, while focusing on the other hand, etc. super normal, really hard to eliminate, takes time :)

      3. I noticed that your wrists are really involved. We never activate our wrists on the piano, instead they just are a nice ball-socket joint that kind of follows along with the part of whatever the arm is doing. Especially in the LH, i notice that it tends to be quite lifted. This will cause imbalance and tension and inaccuracy. Victoria (above) had a great description of feeling like she was stroking or petting the keys. When you pet a dog, you don't activate your wrist. You use your arm to navigate the movement and the hand follows relaxed. Try to find that equivalent with chords :) 

      • Jessica_Pizano
      • 11 hrs ago
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       Thank you. I will keep working on these things. It is certainly a work in progress. I have a tough time sometimes with the amount of hypermobility in my hands (I have a genetic connective tissue disease). This definitely has led to the hesitation because I don't always trust that I will not sublux a joint when hitting the key. I am trying to break this habit, but it is a frustration point for me. Thank you for the feedback!

    • Conrad_Winn
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    https://youtu.be/2x4XhS3nLWg?si=gqjO8V0En5XWDl9Y

     

    Yes goals are important...after being a teacher and speech pathologist for 40 years I can attest to that...

    Over all general goal is to improve consistency in tempo to provide a flowing sense of melody...

    1.) memorize the portion I need to improve...measures 60 through 76...This has been partially done..

     

    2.) Relax especially between  chords...If that doesn't work...drink alcohol..Just joking..

     

    I have improved some as compared to my original above and I can see how this can improve your playing...

     

    I usually memorize my pieces but on this one I was lazy...

     

    thanks for your comments..conrad

      • TWI
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      How could I have forgotten to mention the importance of having a glass of Sauvignon Blanc next to the piano? Thank you for reminding us :) 

       

      Memorization is great... it will help a lot. 

      I heard a lot of improvement with voicing in such a short time. I can see that you are trying to relax more. I think you probably can start seeing where it is working and were it isn't on a recording. 

      I also noticed that you might want to experiment with your bench height. I think you might be sitting a little high and a little close, which is causing your fingering to "brace" a little bit extra. 

      Also, be mindful of your elbow. The elbow is worthless in piano playing. Right now it is having fun trying to lift to the side. :) 

      • Conrad_Winn
      • 8 hrs ago
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       thank you...I appreciate all comments....I was sitting on a pillow..I will remove it...conrad

    • Pamela_Kinnear
    • Yesterday
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    Hi again, Leann. Thank you for your very clear and engaging tutorial. I am continuing with Chopin's Raindrop Prelude this week - middle section. My struggle until now with this section of the Prelude is that it was very ‘growly’ and blurry, and I found it hard to balance my playing to bring out the LH melodic line amongst the low-pitched chords, and the repeated G in the RH also tended to dominate.  All in all, I found it hard to play the passage so that it sounded musical.  I was hugely inspired by listening to Yumeka Nakagawa play it so beautifully during the recent International Chopin competition and wanted to give it another try.  So:

    Voicing and tone: I am aiming for a smooth, ‘non-growly’ tone that emphasises the melodic LH line (and, where appropriate, when it transfers to the RH). 

    Practice tactics/method: The practice tactic that most made sense to me for this passage was the ‘ghosting’ method.  My goodness – it was so hard!!! I couldn’t believe how badly my brain and fingers failed to communicate to help me isolate and play the melody without playing the other notes.  Over the last week or so, the neural pathways have started to fire a bit but it is clear there is a long way to go!  But this technique has really, really helped – first, by exposing this flaw in my technique, and secondly, by helping me address it.

    Here's my video of my attempt – I have taken it all the way through the section so that I join it together with the section I was studying last week where voicing matters too.

    https://1drv.ms/v/c/86de3439f81deda4/EStnQbDjyCJNjb2NJQH_X7kBkmEsENNZXxXPx_igAgoAAA

    Also – I have used the ‘squid/splat’ method (love the metaphor) to help with chords on a couple of things (e.g., Chopin’s E flat nocturne; Debussy’s La fille aux cheveux de lin) and it has really helped me so thank you!

      • TWI
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       There's a lot of improvement nice work! Ghosting is quite hard but pays off!

      1. It is ok on this piece to play the repeated note with the alternating fingers... but the truth is that, with good technique, you do not NEED to ever switch fingers on repeated notes. It was a thing that editors put in to scores to help "change the tone and phrasing" of repeated notes.... but, think about it.... they are saying "if you change the fingers it will change the notes"... that implies that we don't have a good enough technique to remain consistent when changing fingering... and that we should just phrase off of however our different finger falls LOL. A good technique means that we should be able to control a note not matter what fingering we are using. Even playing with a single finger, we can control every note, every time. When I came to this realization, I found it actually made sense to, most times, stay with the same finger on the same note... doing the finger alteration can feel cumbersome and off-balance. I noticed you also curl your other fingers to help accommodate. Something to play around with. 

      2. There were a few LH octaves/chords that enjoyed lingering. This is not bad (as long as we are not pressing or freezing) BUT you could make your life easier by using the time to move to your next chord/octave earlier. There were a few times that you slid to the next note at the last minute and the speed in which you had to slide kind of "jolted" everything and cause a little bit of hiccup in your phrasing and line. 

       

      Just some extra things to look out for/ponder. 

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